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PostSubject: A Johto Life! (PG)   Wed May 14, 2008 10:48 am

A Johto life

CHAPTER I

I rolled out of my bed, I was still sleepy, it was still morning, and the sun was hot, it's yellow appearance made it gleam threw my window, but it was cool, 32F. After I had gotten dressed in my red sweats, I ran down stairs. "Mom, I'm going to Lexi's to battle, be back later!" I yelled. I had had a crush on Lexi since last year, after she had moved from Orre. I grabbed my bike and was off.



Once I was a Lexi's house I rang the doorbell, her house was a very large stone building, originally meant for the king, but after Johto had became a Democracy the mansion was put up for sale, and Lexi moved in.



"Bonjour mon ami" I said to her, she loved it when I speak French. "Mai-je entrer?" I asked. "Wee." She said. Lexi's deep blue eyes shimmered like two lovely pools of sapphire, her lips like ruby's, her hair, deep red, she was beautiful. "That's enough French, lets get to business!" Lexi said. She pulled out a red and white ball. "Hay Eevee, lets show Ace what were all about!" Lexi yelled throwing the sphere into the air. A burst of light gave way to a small pokemon, with an heart on its forehead. "So you are using you're Eevee, okay then, go my friend!" I yelled.



A pokemon appeared, it an otter like pokemon, a Buizel, I had gotten it as a gift from my dad. "Buizel, watergun!" I yelled. The orange pokemon sent a beem of water out towards the Eevee. "Eevee...DIG NOW!" Lexi ordered. "Buizel watch out, Eevee is under you somewhere." I said



"Now Eevee!" Lexi yelled, and that was the battle. "Buizle...are...are you okay?" I asked tenderly. "Bui buiz" Buizel said. "You should rest." I said, calling him back into his pokeball.



"Good battle Ace." Lexi said after seeing that Buizel was not hurt at all.

~LATER~



"So Ace, do you want some Pizza?" Lexi asked. "Yeah." I said. I looked out the window, it was snowing, very very hard. "Lex, could I use the phone?" I asked Lexi. "Sure, you should call you're mom, its snowing way to hard for you to go for a bit." Lexi replied. I got off the brown chair and got to the phone, the phone was dead, it was a blizzard now, normally in Mahogany town. "Hay Lex, the phone is down." I said, grabbing the remote off of the stand and changing the channel from Cartoon network, to the weather channel. "A blizzard warning has been issued for you're area, please do not leave you're house unless you need to." The voice said



"A blizzard!? Well Buizel will wish to see this" I thought. "Go Buizel!" I said sending out a red and white orb, and Buizel appered. Lexi soon fallowed and sent out Eevee. We turned on the fireplace and driffted to sleep.

~END CHAPTER 1~

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PostSubject: Re: A Johto Life! (PG)   Mon May 19, 2008 4:28 pm

CHAPTER 2, THE SNOW ANGEL!



~THE NEXT MORNING~



"Over 10 feet, yes FEET of snow fell yesterday. More snow is on the way, in about 3-4 hours

it will start to snow again, if you need something, go out now." Channel 11's meteorologist said. "Good morning." I said to Buizel who had been by my feet. "Good morning sleepy head." Lexi said. "My mom and dad told you're mom you were going to stay until the blizzard warnings go down." Lexi finished





"Thanks." I said. "Hay you two" Lexi's dad said "Professor Elm called, he said that you should go outside and look for ice pokemon." Lexi's dad finished.



"In this weather, I would freeze" I thought. After we got dressed in winter clothes, which I had to wear Lexi older brother's clothes. After we were out there was little to see, we both sunk into the fluffy snow, it shimmered in the bright sun shine. "Lex, who's that?" I asked Lexi pointing to a teenage boy about 5:3, black hair, and appeared to be in shorts. "I don't know, hey boy!" Lexi yelled. The boy darted, he somehow was able to stay above the snow, then he fell, he glided down a massive hill towards Lake Legend, then he disappeared under the thin ice.



"Buizel go!" I yelled on an impulse. "Use aquajet on the ice!" I ordered. Buizel jumped and was encased in a stream of water, when he hit the ice, it shattered sending Buizel backwards hitting a tree. Lexi and I ran like jackrabbits to the pond. I could see his body floating in the middle of the lake, the water was to cold to get in and try to save him. "I calling 9-1-1." Lexi said pulling out her pokenav and dialed the numbers, when suddenly a dog like pokemon appeared.



The dog was blue like the sea, I instantly knew who he was, it was the snow angel, Suicune. It jumped on the water and dragged the body of the kid back too the shore. I looked into that Pokemon's blue eyes, he looked back at me, then the ambulance came, I looked over my shoulder, and when I turned back he was gone.
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PostSubject: Re: A Johto Life! (PG)   Thu May 29, 2008 1:37 pm

CHAPTER III

Erin



The red light and the sound of the siren were off in the distance, I instantly could tell he was not breathing, I started chest compressions. After about 5 minuets the ambulance arrived. The boy was loaded onto the van and drove away. "Lexi, quick, we need to get our bikes." I said and ran off to my house.



Lexi and I ran into each other. "Lexi, we need to get to the hospital now." I yelled. Without thinking, Lexi and I darted, and we soon were beside the ambulance.



We pulled into Bauu Memorial hospital. "Sorry kids no admittance." A man said. The man, who I assumed as the security guard. "Sir, I have too see my mother who is deathly ill, she had," Lexi paused for a moment and started to cry "she has...has brain cancer, please let me in." Lexi finished, I knew that she was a good actor, but that bit was amazing.



"I...I did not know, I...I'm so sorry, please...go in." The man said in a tone of regret. After we walked into the doors of the massive hospital, we saw the boy. "That was amazing Lex." I said. "And you said the lessons were a waste of time." Lexi Replied to me.



We were approaching the front desk when the ground jolted, the movement was amazing, books were falling, lights were falling, then everything went black.

3 days later



My eyes popped open, I was in a room, on a bed. My face was on a pillow, I was covered with a blanket. "He is awake!" A voice yelled. I knew the voice, it was full of love. "Er..Erin?" I asked in a groggy voice. I looked around the room, it was in a hospital. "Ace, you hit you're head pretty hard when you fell, I happened to be visiting Johto, so when I herd I rushed over on my bike, but some kid with a Pikachu destroyed it, but anyway, I should let the Doctor talk." Erin said with a voice full of hope and love.



I sat up, I noticed a wire coming from my vain. "Hello Ace, I am Doctor Suii, you were on the head with a large book, but that might have saved you're life, you had a very deadly type of the flu, we found this out after you were hit with the book." The Doctor said.



I looked around, Erin, Lexi, Mom, and Dad were there. I had not seen my best friend Erin for a long time. "However, we were able to treat it, and you will be able to leave in about a week." The Doctor finished "A WEEK!?" I said, surprised by my own voice.



"Yes...and no reason to yell." Doctor Suii said. I could not believe it, a week. "The hospital was boring enough" I thought. "Am I able to go outside?" I asked. "Yes...you must stay here so we can monitor you're status, you can go anywhere on hospital ground." The Doctor said
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PostSubject: Re: A Johto Life! (PG)   Thu May 29, 2008 6:14 pm

It's good, but short and you have many misspellings.

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